This could be even more fantastic - but is great
I made some kids play with this - 9 & 7 yr old boys - they liked the characters but found the sound annoying - me too! Maybe a litlle background music groove and re-record the voices in less annoying voice - also once the game is explained I'm not sure you need "choose a body" etc each time - at least not so pronunced. Anyway I think its a great way to show off your animation and my favourite bit is the email bear. I want to see more games from you.
Cheers baby! Always good to get a professional opinion. Your quite good!
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